All these days, I have been waiting to write an article in my (so called) Blog! ... Was waiting for a right time, right story or right incident in order to write one! .. But, I just realised , yesterday night!! (while preparing for my first final semester final exam :P ) That why am I even waiting for the right time!!! ... You need some "auspicious time" to write just a simple article???!! ... "NO" .... Why am i waiting for the right story?? ... when there are thousands of things happening not just around world .. but just around me! ... should i still wait for a story?? .. "NO" ... 'Waiting for a right incident?' .. "Shut it girl! there are "n" no. of things going around in your mind... you have to make choice! " was what I told myself! ... Then c'mon .. "let me give my blog a life!" was what I thought! ... And by the time i thought about all the above stuff, I was feeling sleepy :P .. so thought would get back to it the next day ... and that's today .. and that's why i am here!!
Huh!! Great nonsense in the above para I know.. but can't help it! ... atleast this is the place where it gives me the complete freedom to express what I went through, be it a minute thought or a major cooking up of the brain!
I am sure many are going to raise their eyebrows after reading the poem i am gonna post at the end .... but relax guys!! ... it is just one of the poems i wrote ... and it's all about my friends' experiences... general view of love .... common experiences by many and the very common stories! ... So better not arrive at any conclusions... And btw (by the way!) I thank blogspot.com for enabling me to throw light on my hidden talents .. :P ... lol .. and yeah! basically i decided to start blogging so that it would help me in my GMAT :P ... :D ... Finally here comes my poem
dedicated to all those people who can relate themselves with those lines :)
Should I feel lucky? Should I feel UNLUCKY?
Should I Feel I am not fit? Should I feel he is not fit?
Why does it sometimes feel so IRKY?
Why are these thoughts always in the form of a split?
It is not me, It is not YOU
It is most of us, who go through
This phase, except the lucky, FEW
It still remains unanswered, neither false nor true!
Many cheerful moments have been spent TOGETHER
You share sorrow,you share love, you share work, you share joy
It takes all this to understand one ANOTHER
When you think of all these moments, you feel elated, Oh,Boy!
I tried to chuck all the ants in PANTS
Everytime, I tried to find in this mess, something rosy
All was futile, but it all revived only when i was captivated, by his mesmerising CHANTS!
All his efforts only made me feel even more cosy
Why i love him so much, there's no REASON
The amount of love may seem like an endless ocean
We love , we fight, we are together, be it any SEASON
All this is too good, I am afraid!, its not my imagination
Some express some don't, some pour out some DON'T
Some show it all at once, some store it for the right time
When i ask with insecurity "will u get bored of me?", he says he WON'T
Trust him,Stand by him,Love him, I will, through out my lifetime!
P.S:- Please do comment about the entire blog .. not just the poem ... this is my first article .. really seeking to improve with the help of your valuable comments:)
rofl! super poem..musth undi dee dee..and yea, gmat thokka ani gaali teesesav..like u said, this is abt expressing urself, write everythign dat cmes across ur mind..dont hesitate..ull love reading it wen u r 80!..
ReplyDelete@adi : Hehe thanks ... and yaaa whatt gaali thiyyadammmm .. unnadi cheppinaa .. lol .. ya i ll love reading it later kani .... note lo cheppa kada.. dont just comment abt the poem .. also comment on the entire article altogether ani ... mee lanti seniors advice isthe ne kadaaa ... ma lanti juniors improve ayyedi :P .. comment critically dudeee!! :D
ReplyDeletefirst one but not the best one!!
ReplyDeleteim looking forwrd for the tadka of soumya terala!!
Trust me u r gifted with naturality!all u need to do is put them into words and i bet u,that tadka which i mentiond will b thr!
CHEERS!!! SOUMYA....
vd luv,
Chaitanya.
@chaitanya: thnks!! :) ... and yeah will certainly improve on my writing skills :) to stand up to ur expectations
ReplyDeleteHey Soumyaaa.....
ReplyDeletewelcome...welcome to blogging!
guess wat, even I started my blog before my semester exams and when I had loads to study! same pinch!!donno know if u read it.. nothing noteworthy though!!
http://myapplemartini.blogspot.com/2007/03/here-comes-little-nothings_04.html
blogging is fun! it is an expression of you..keep writing and yeah, i like your poem..
adious girl,
AS...
heyyy ... thnks a lot for the acknowledgement ... ya i ahve read most of the articles on ur blog!! :) ... they r cool! .. hoping to write good articles further! ... nyways.. cya :)
ReplyDeleteteach me :D
ReplyDelete@tarun: Lol! .. what should i teach you :D ..I am not good enough for that :P
ReplyDeleteyea..u dont really have to be amazing
ReplyDeleteur gud
u'll have to be better than me to teach..so not an issue
I dont really consider that I am better than you .. until there is some solid evidence .. lol :P .. aina edo nee abhimanam .. hehe ..
ReplyDeletelet's chuck out few mistakes : Never use "yesterday night", use 'last night'.. and there are a few eeny-miny mistakes, which i wouldn't want to point out.. You can get it by reading it.. as for the poem, a good start, soumya.. i just felt the line "You share sorrow,you share love, you share work, you share joy", 'you share' usage could have been reduced, cuz it kindaa din fit the poem..
ReplyDeletei am just giving my opinion..
kudos.. !!
@D : heyyy .. thnks for ur opinion ... hmm i agree .. last night would sound better ... thnks for the correction :) .... and hmm ya i ll try to avoid those minor mistakes too :D ... and coming to the "share" part in the poem ... hmm .. np .. i welcome ur opinion :) .. thnk uuuuu :D
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