A "Sonnet" ( I claim it to be one :P )

Hey friends! Here's a "Sonnet" for you. Well before I post it, let me explain what a "Sonnet" is to those who do not know what it is. A "Sonnet" is a 14 lines poem in which, the first 6 lines comprises of a problem and the remaining 8 lines convey a solution to that problem.

The "Sonnet" i wrote may not be the perfect example of its actual kind, but I claim it to be one of its kind. So all sorts of criticism are welcomed. The theme of my "Sonnet" is rather a general problem than a personal one. So it is not intended at anyone. It's just some random topic with my friend which made me write such a poem.

It goes like this ...

It is no more the same! The way we talk , the way we mock
Evrything seems to you so lame! Be it a Hi! or be it a Bye!
I try to be as patient as I can! But, at every word I speak
You throw at my face a pan! Everytime acting like a freak!
Harder I try To bring back those moments,
More you make me cry with your pitiless comments!
It is you, it is me , Who can get back those moments again
So why not we, together regain those moments!
Let us break the evil spell , Caste on our friendship
How?, that we both know enough, well!
Let us remember how we used to be, Let us not take an advantage
Of each other, however close we might be. To bring those days back, we need courage.
Respect each other's opinion, We will! Share our thoughts, only to care
All the sad memories, we will kill! Commit these mistakes again, let us not dare!

Please leave your suggestions.
Cheers!
Soumya